pauly2smally's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Use Boxmen]

first 6 levels were awesome

then what the fuck? you expect peope to figure that shit out?

weak.

i loved it tho.

[Holy Crap, NINJAS!]

It was goos

when i started i was like, woah this could go front page, but then it got boring fast, cause obv it was just walking around collecting coins

i know it's only a minor problem but you seriously need sound effects, especially when collecting coins. It's just an essencial!

It was good, but i'd keep working at this and resubmit it, cause you could get front page..

[FlashText]

FGS :l

you don't submit that stuff here

no one comes on newgrounds, sees this and goes

YES! FINALLY now i can send an email from newgrounds

well done for creating the program but wdf, why did you bother submitting it...what were you expecting

i typed a word in, chanegd he backround, chanegd the font around and you know what

i might as well submit microsoft word

and even if i was the person who invented it..it wouldn't pass

don't submit everything you do :l

0'd

andy70707 responds:

Microsoft word costs money, and it wasnt made in flash. I dont just submit everything, I have about 300 flash files on my computer, about 150 are unfinished, 100 are finished, but just not that good, and 50 are finished and good, but I have only submitted 27 so far, and I am not planning on submitting already-done work, only new stuff.

[Animated Preloaders]

well

i've watched it four tiems and still can't

if you should screen shots on flahs it would help cause at the moment

im shotuing at ym screen 'that tutroials bollocks'

it's pretty good though but when you said easy enough so far i nearly tore my balls off.

:P

[Sprite Sheet Tutorial]

it was coreect and stuff.

but the writtin could of been clearer, it was flash bakround, fine as long as its not stretched to kingdom come... :l
the writtin was black on a white backroun on flash, why not a blakc on a red bakrround or something (blak on red probs a bad example)

asides the flash, i noticed in ur pictures there's a little habbo, if ur on habbo uk look me up, i'm 'funkyspraggs'

[prison break]

finish it...quick!

that was really enjoyable, some of the stuff was repetetive but the ability fing was a great idea and it was reli fun, u must finish it, front page stuff!!! (finished that is)

star-orion responds:

thankyou

[Short GFX-Tut]

the point of a tutorial is your helping peopl

that will do nothing to help people, hand drawn is always better then shapes and you definately don't need to be a great animator to know that, you just don't have to be a noob, basically you just drew shapes and moulded them, all noobs do this (no offence, even i did it) so your actually teaching a tutorial about how to be a noob at flash (noob is not a hate word here its a describing word) you have potential but none of that helped me at all, the blinking was especially poor, and i didn't think much of the way you said that looks better rather then it's easier to do. because it doesnt look better. sorry but i voted 0 cause it didn't help me, just made me laugh about how someone so new and well... not very good at flash (for now ;)) was trying to teach others, for now you should be reading the tutorials, not making them, get better, than teach.

also it was way to short
you just showed eyes and clouds, that is really quite useless. look back on this and laugh some day for it's poor. your better then shapes, practise hand drawn, trust me, it works
sooooooooooooo much better, and you actualy improve

[PingPong Game]

hahahaha

that was hard to make?!?!?

that was pong u tard

thats like the easiest game to make, ur hopeless if you can't do that

however

im guessing ur justr begining flash so considering thatn it wasnt bad

but if ur not a nooby

its terrible

[Simple Game Tutorial]

helped me out sooo much

thanks

where did you get the music, its great

i want it...:D

kingcarlo responds:

I got it from the audio portal. u can see its by Darkstalker-X on teh side, so if you want it, just search him on the audio portal and his music will be there:) thanks for the good grade.

[Captain Tsubasa]

ok

the sprites ruined it big time, draw ur own stuff or dt make a game you know...

ok though, entertainin for a bit, maybe sum speed ups or sumin wold make it beter